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Crime Bible #3 From Script to Page with Matthew Clark

Many readers take for granted the amount of work that goes into the comics that they find fresh on shelves every Wednesday afternoon, not contemplating the role of writer, artist, colorist, letterer, editor, and all the other post-production hands that contribute to the final product.

Thanks to artist Matthew Clark (who provided art and commentary) and writer Greg Rucka (who allowed us to publish his script), we’re able to take a look at the process that goes into transforming a writer’s scripts into a story on the page. The following commentary by Clark originally appeared on his MySpace page, where you can find updates on his current work, and additional behind-the-scenes looks at his art.

Below, you’ll find a page-by-page look at the creation of Crime Bible #3, beginning with Greg Rucka’s script, then Matthew Clark’s pencil’s, then Clark’s inks, then Clark’s commentary.

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PAGES 2-3:

Penciled 2-3 by Matthew Clark

Page 2-3 inks by Matthew Clark

Matthew says: “Since I was inking this issue also I didn’t pencil as tight, keeping it loose….”

Page 4:

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Inked 4 by Matthew Clark

Matthew says: “Really loose pencils…done at size then blown up to 11×17 for inks. Notice the subtle changes, or not-so-subtle changes. I made some decisions in the inks to hopefully make the page work better. Give the book a Noir feel.”

Page 5:

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Matthew says: “Every once in a while I do my sound efx…. Sometimes they make it in, other times they get digitally erased. Other times my display lettering gets covered by other display lettering, but you can still see it…more on that later.”

Page 6:

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Matthew says: “This marks Montoya’s return to Gotham City since 52. After reading the script and knowing the writer well enough, I added a panel [on what] was a panel heavy page to begin with. But I felt the panel was needed. The opening shot is the added panel. It should also look similar — this is the opening shot of Lt. Gordon taking the train to Gotham from Batman Year One. My tip of the hat to David Mazzuchelli. This panel is also the only full-bleed panel in the issue. It appears again on page 22 as Renee is leaving Gotham. I felt it was a nice book ends to the story. This page also has the lettering mistake. In the script, the bar is called Molly’s. In the ref. I got and hunted around for, the bar was called Marlowe’s. I did some of the lettering on computer picking the fonts. I put in Molly’s. The Letterer put in Marlowe’s but didn’t take mine out. Check the book.

One of the things that happens is things get covered up. In the final printed version, Xenon’s lettering was covered up, so people might not have caught on that that is where Renee’s ex works.”

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Matthew says: “This was a tough page to tackle. A lot of the dialogue is the Commish, but it’s not his book, so that’s a fine line. While he’s a headline in Batman, or he should be, in CB he’s a character actor. So he has a scene but hopefully nothing too scene stealing. I like Gordon and wanted to do him justice. Maggie got the short end of this page since it was compressed to a single page and either Renee or Gordon speaking Maggie got left to background. It happens.”

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Matthew says: “Here is the first meeting of Bullock and Montoya since Bullock killed the gunman who shot The Commish. He’s back with his badge. Why? I have no idea. He came back during the OYL storylines…. Which is a shame, as a fan of Homicide and the fall of Kellerman, I enjoyed the writers’ tribute to that story. Being a dark and moody part of the story, I whipped out the grease pencil and tried to make the lighting really moody.”

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Matthew says: “This marks Kathy’s new look. This page is also different from the printed version. In the top panel, I had placed a “K” on the ground to help readers with location. This page and one other had problems with the scans, but I had made copies and burned a disc. I also sent in the board just in case. STILL it was missed.”

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Matthew says: “Art-wise, this was one of my least favorite pages. It happens. Just nothing worked for me on the page. I ended up blackening out panels two and three and redid them on a separate page. Sometimes you have to let pages/panels go. ”

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Matthew says: “This page is one of my favorites, not the favorite, but unlike the previous page, this one worked for me. Go figure.”

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Matthew says: “I submitted to my editor two versions since this was a big reveal of the character not seen since 52. I wanted to make it the best it could. We went with this one, a better choice I think. Also, please note the wash texture on the costume…something that was completely lost in the color. ”

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Matthew says: “Ok, I like breasts, and I’m really liking the spillage of the breasts in dresses. It’s something I’m needing to work out. Hence the Penguin Babes in panels one and two, on purpose. I figure that Cobblepot’s a boob man.

And the inks…all black and sleek looking…and yes in the last panel is me when i had longish hair and minus the broken nose…FYI.”

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Matthew says: “At this point in Crime Bible, I needed help. Due to the holidays, the book was bumped up on the schedule, so my friend Steve Lieber and Jeremy Colwell came in and helped out, I would then go over the pages if need be to add my touch.”

Page 17:

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Matthew says: “…The unfinished inks. I can’t seem to find the finished one. Special thanks to Jeremy C. for clutch help.”

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Matthew says: “This is one of those pages that I don’t know if the art works. It’s serviceable, but really kinda blah, in my opinion.”

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Matthew says: “After I sent in the pages all corrected and ready for lettering, I realized two things on this page I wish I had done. Panel one — pull out more see that it’s the Batarang hitting the book. Second — switch panels two and three. Honestly, I think it would have worked better, in my opinion.

Thanks to JC once again for all his brushy work.”

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Matthew says: “Note the change. I forgot I had removed Q’s hat and then drew it in the last panel, but as we’ll see on the [inked] page, it’s on the ground. ”

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Matthew says: “Hope you’ve enjoyed the look into my process. Its been fun…. I really wanted you to SEE what I had done in Crime Bible, warts and all. Thanks for looking and hopefully enjoying.”

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The Question of Gender and Sexuality

The lesbian-Latina Renee Montoya has addressed numerous issues of gender and sexuality throughout her publication history. From her controversial coming out that garnered both awards and criticism, to her transition from police officer to “legacy character” vigilante, the character has inspired discussion, sometimes deep, often times heated, from both fans and scholars.

The following conversation is an attempt to continue those discussions and initiate new ones. Far from being the final say on the character and the issues addressed throughout her publication history, this discussion will hopefully inspire others to consider taking a deeper look at Renee Montoya.

Contributors:

SCOTT ANDERSON

I’m Scott Anderson. I’m not sure I have any “areas of expertise” relevant to this topic, but I did major in English and history, I’m one of the foundering group of guys of the Gay League, which I believe is the largest English-speaking gay comic readers group in the world; although, Joe Palmer could tell you more about the Gay League than I can, and I do work for Prism Comics as one of their message board moderators, the editor of their webcomics page, and one of the writers of Queer Eye on Comics column. I have also had articles printed in Prism Comics: Your LGBT Guide to Comics. The 2008 edition is coming out soon with an article of mine looking at mad scientists. My blog, which frequently discusses comic and social issues related to being gay, is read by more people than I ever expected, which is to say more than just me. Whether all that makes me an expert or just a busybody, I don’t know.

I’ve been reading comics for as long as I could read and I’ve been looking at the pictures for longer. I’ve been reading comics for as long as I could read, and before that, I was looking at the pictures.

JOE PALMER

I’m Joe Palmer and writing introductions is something I rarely look forward to doing. I have a Bachelor’s of Fine Arts from the School of the Art Institute of Chicago. My two primary focuses were printmaking and Japanese art history. Mounting debt from school loans and massive cuts to the school’s budget in state funding as punitive action to a student’s art piece scuttled my plans of going on to grad school.

I’ve read and enjoyed comics for quite a number of years now, longer than I care to admit or is relevant here. My first comics were DC and soon I was spending equal time reading Marvel. Reading habits and interests have changed over the years, but I think DC will remain as favorite.

Like Scott Anderson and actually through him, I became involved in Gay League very early on, though perhaps not exactly as one of the originals, and after more involvement and time, the website was handed over to my by its founder, Anton Kawasaki. My memory is fuzzy now, but it in 1998 (it seems like an accurate date) I was invited to become a member of GLAAD’s Media Awards nominations committee for the comic book category. This is, again if memory is correct, the first time I fleetingly met Loren Javier.

I am also one of the original members of the the prototype organization from which Prism Comics was born, and am one of Prism’s founding members though have since resigned.

Presently I am working on an idea for a comic series though its format is yet to be decided. This is still in the research phase, so please wish me good luck.

AMY READS

I am Amy Reads, an academic who studies Victorian literature and culture and gender studies. (I defend my dissertation this Thursday [editor's note -- according to Amy's blog, now successfully defended!] (!), so if everything goes well, soon I will be Dr. Amy Reads.) I also dabble, academically, in popular culture (science fiction, comics, mysteries) and issues of the body.

Personally, I am a fan of All Things Amazon, All The Time, and have loved Wonder Woman since I was old enough to pretend I could fly. I’m a DC girl, through and through, although I read Marvel, too. Dark Horse, I adore (Buffy! Hellboy!) and I miss CrossGen (Ruse!).

Renee has been a favorite of mine for some time now, as I find her origins, like Harley Quinn’s, to be fascinating: a crossover from the television show to the comic book. I particularly enjoy what Mr. Rucka has done with Renee, and I found her storyline to be the most interesting and complex of 52. As a fan, I find her to be exemplary of a new push in comics towards strong, complex women who are not stereotypical of their designations. Renee is not a stock character; she is fully realized, and I believe that is mostly due to good writing (as so many good things often are). As a feminist scholar, I find her to be the first tentative fulfillment of a long and arduous journey toward redefining what a superhero is in comic books. In particular, the fact that she has assumed the mantle of the Question and has not become “Girl Question” or “Question Mark” (Forgive Me, Friends: now you see why DC has not asked me to assume any editorial duties) demonstrates an at least fledgling commitment to rethinking the gender divide in comics.

We should never forget gender in comics, but we should never be dependent on them for our heroic designations.

The Subtext of the Mask

In the comments of a blog posting about Batwoman, Valerie D’Orazio implies that there’s an ulterior motive in hiding one of DC’s best-known lesbian characters behind a featureless gender-neutral mask:

As for the Question being being DC’s “star” lesbian character: she’s a FACELESS character named the “Question.” Wow, what a metaphor.

Whereas Amy Reads wrote in a guest column at Girl-Wonder:

Renee Montoya’s recent transformation into The Question is a transformation into an identity that is, by its Very Nature, Absent of Identity. It is a mantle that depends solely on the mantle, solely on the heroism, solely on the worth of the person, male or female, beneath. It is a mantle that, Truly, Friends, depends on a complete redefinition of The Body Beneath.

What Renee Montoya’s The Question ultimately demonstrates, to This Humble Author, at least, is that if a redefinition and a reclamation of The Body Beneath can occur successfully in our Literature, in our Popular Culture, then it can in our “Real Life” as well. Renee is a strong woman and a strong hero, and neither identity is dependent on the other.

What do you see as the subtext of a well-known lesbian character like Renee Montoya putting on this mask — is it a commentary on lesbian invisibility, an example of it, or something deeper?

Amy Reads: I think, in some ways, yes, and no, and perhaps.

That is to say, I think yes, it could be an example of lesbian invisibility, in that Renee is completely faceless, and her clothing mimics Vic’s before her, and is thus “mannish,” or clothing designated traditionally masculine (trench, trousers, hat). Or perhaps a commentary on lesbian invisibility, in that Renee cannot be visible, as she never can be visible to a society that would discount her doubly–as a woman, and as a lesbian–and triply–as also a Latina lesbian. But so, too, can we see it as post-gender and post-sex, in that the man who had the mantle before her was faceless, too, and he existed in a position of privilege, as a white man in America. In this sense, Renee could be seen as the reconfiguration of privilege, a new type of woman for a new century.

But then, I think that is the beauty of Renee. She can be a multitude of things, even all at the same time.

Joe Palmer: This is a topic that I started to mull over a little over a week ago. I can understand the points made by both D’Orazio and Reads. As humans we tend to assign names and qualifiers to everything, especially each other. One group of people (you may categorize the group as you like) decides for whatever reason that another group is unlike them and assigns all sorts of negative ideas and beliefs to the second batch. Group A starts to depersonalize group B and one method of doing that is by removing their identity by metaphorically making them faceless.

On the other hand, it would seem easier for the reader (or listener or viewer) to project their dreams and aspirations onto a faceless hero or protagonist.

Does the fact that the Question is seen without her face being obscured when she is out of costume make any difference in either of the viewpoints expressed by D’Orazio and Reads? If so, does the quantity and quality of scenes with Renee impact this in any way?

How likely is it that this topic would be brought up if the Question were still a heterosexual male hero? My personal opinion is that this would be a non-issue.

Does the facelessness of the mask lessen the possibility of the character being co-opted as a sexual fantasy object?

Scott Anderson:

I read through Val’s comments. There is no real argument about the metaphor. By that I mean, that if you see a symbolic connection between the representation of lesbians in media and the faceless mask, you do. For you, it is a metaphor.

However, when Val was asked, “Are you saying that the mask marginalizes Renee?” Val answered, “Yes.”

I just don’t see it. I pretty much agree with Val when she said, “Montoya pre-Question was a great character. She was her own character. Her homosexuality grew organically out of who she was. And, to DC’s credit, they stood by that decision even though originally it freaked out Time Warner. There was no reason to make her The Question. You could have left her as one of the long line of great DC detectives, without superpowers.” She could have stayed just as she was, but given that Gotham central was cancelled, she’d have been just as she was without a book.

The Question story arc didn’t marginalize her. It pulled her into the most hyped and best-selling of DC’s books, 52. It allowed her to star in her own mini-series. Neither of these would have been an option without making her something other than just another detective in the Gotham PD. Does anyone believe that a Renee Montoya (non-Question) mini would have been green lighted after Gotham Central was cancelled for lack of sales? Can anyone name a detective comic currently published by DC (nee Detective Comics)? Oh, sure, they used to publish detective comics, but Gotham Central was stab at doing it again, but let’s face it, CSIs and Law & Orders may rule the TV roost, but in comics, you’d have to be a detective to find a detective.

There is something to be said about the specifics of the Question’s look, but I think we have to first acknowledge the broader context. If DC wanted to marginalize Renee the simplest thing to do was nothing. Since her book was cancelled, doing nothing would have given her a one way ticket to comic book Limbo where she could languish with Hamilton Drew, Roy Raymond: T.V. detective, and the entire O’Dare family. So she wasn’t marginalized in the way the most marginalized characters are (i.e. they simply cease appearing in comics.)

So does her costume marginalize her in the sense that it removes her lesbianism or status as a woman? I think we could make a case in a general sense that her status as a woman is visually downplayed as opposed to the vast majority of female characters who have their female physical attributes visually emphasized, but I can’t say that I’ve ever heard feminist argue that there is something wrong with downplaying the female physical characteristics or stereotypical female ways of dressing in a comic character, and as a feminist, I’d have to say that Renee is a welcome change.

And this brings up the catch 22 problem with lesbian characters. When the lesbian character is created in a manner that emphasizes her female physical characteristics, we hear people complain that the character is only being done that way to make her appeal to straight male fanboys, which somehow invalidates her as contributing to diversity. Further, we hear that superheroes wearing skirts and high heels are silly, and even sexist in using that silliness in female characters. But when those characteristics are downplayed and the clothing is more functional as with the Question, Val tells us that there is a problem with her wearing “men’s clothing.” What exactly counts as men’s clothing? Pants. Flats? The only thing that stood out to me as being particularly associated with male dress was the fedora, which didn’t appear in 2 of the 5 issues of the Crime Bible mini and even when it did, I was still able to remember that Renee was a woman and tell that she was a woman by looking at her. I’m a wee bit surprised to see Val, who normally takes a fairly feminist view of things, suggesting that a woman’s identity as a woman is defined by her hats … or shoes or pants or whatever it is. I’m perfectly able to tell my sister is a woman even when she is dressed in her firefighter uniform that I suppose one might term as “men’s clothing.” The firefighter is not men’s clothing when my sister wears it. It’s her uniform, her clothing, her woman’s clothing. Similarly, the Question’s uniform ceases to be men’s clothing when it is worn by a woman. I might add that just as my sister stands out more as woman when she is in her uniform that is traditionally worn only by men, so too might we make a case that Renee’s wearing of clothing that might be traditionally male makes her stand out from other women.

The faceless element of the costume also seems to cause Val some consternation that I’m not bothered by. As I said, if she wants to read or can’t help but to read it as a metaphor, well, she does. But I just can’t see how it marginalizes Renee as a person or specifically as a lesbian. The mask didn’t hid the dramatic tension of two ex-lovers when the Question and Batwoman fought. It didn’t prevent Renee from having a sexual liaison with a woman in issue 2 of the Crime Bible series, who Renee is reunited with at the end. I might add that Renee is not in the mask when she’s making love to that woman in issue 2. So it’s not as if she lost her identity any more than Vic Sage lost his as a heterosexual or a man.

One might even argue that it is the very lack of identity that makes the Question uniquely identifiable. Frankly, I’m not at all sure I’d be able to spot Renee or Vic or even Bruce Wayne in a crowd of people in a comic book. However, the Question is immediately identifiable no matter what clothing he or she is wearing. I’d be willing to be that far more comic readers (young or old) could spot the Question than Renee … or even Bruce. To suggest that a lack of identifiable features marginalizes a character is to suggest that more people would know who Mr. Griffin was if he’d never become the invisible man. Does anyone believe that Mr. Griffin’s invisibility marginalized him as a character? Or would most of us believe that it was his lack of features that focused our attention on him? Surely, I’m not the only one who thinks that it was Question’s lack of features that made the character distinct from the rest of the suited detectives that have littered comics for decades. It was his (and now her) lack of features that kept the character from being marginalized.

The Question of the Suit

Scott Anderson: Despite what I said before about the Question’s “costume” not being “men’s clothing” when worn by Renee, I do think there is something about the issue of the suit and how it works with Renee wearing it that is worth mentioning that deals with the difference of men and women in suits.

There is something specific to the suit in American culture that suggests anonymity. It’s the uniform of business man that changes very little as the years pass or as the price rises. We can immediately tell the difference between a cheap dress and an expensive gown and very frequently we can tell pretty much what year it was made. But the suit evolves more slowly and doesn’t become much more elaborate or decorative as it becomes more expensive. It is intended to keep men from being noticed or from standing out.

The suit also becomes synonymous with the man. In the 1960s, calling someone “a suit” implied that he was a conformist, a drone in the system. The Man in the Gray Flannel Suit was a popular novel and later a film that depicted men’s loss of meaning as they submerged themselves into corporate life. The suit was symbolic of the loss of individuality. Self-important politicians and business men are referred to as “empty suits.”

When Vic wore the suit and added the mask, he seemed to me to reflect a kind of anonymity that I don’t feel from Renee precisely because she is a woman. On a man, the suit suggests conformity, but to me, the suit on a woman suggests a rejection of feminine norms. It’s essentially the opposite message.

It is for this reason that I think the Question’s look works better on Vic than on Renee. The Question’s facelessness combined suit doubles the effect of the featurelessness of the character when it’s on man. He becomes a generic man, a non-entity. On Renee, I think the two images work at cross purposes. The mask makes her featureless but the suits suggest a kind of rebellion against the anonymity of conformity. Even the outfits that Renee wears depart from the standard suit. While I don’t recall ever seeing Ditko’s Question out of the suit and tie look and I only rarely recall O’Neil’s being out of it, Renee diverges from the suit and tie quite a bit. In the Books of Blood, she never wears the standard white shirt and tie. She wears a dark blouse, a ribbed sweater, and a tank top. In one book, she wears a knit cap instead of the fedora. I recall walking in a gay pride parade where a spectator held up a sign that read “More Clothing Choices for Men!” The difference in the variety of outfits between the male and female Questions validates that spectator’s desires.

Speaking of the fedora, the difference between Vic’s conformist short hair cut, essentially hidden by the fedora, making him even more nondescript, and Renee’s hair sticking out from under the fedora in a ponytail or flowing about her shoulders was striking. Part of the Question’s M.O. is that the gas that the character releases changes the color of both clothing and hair. However, while the hair color change on Vic was a clever bit that helped to suggest that he was more able to hide his identity, the fact that he had a nondescript hair style and hid it under a hat already gave him an air of anonymity. The gas changes Renee’s hair color, but we are still very aware of the style of her haircut. It stands out in a way that Vic’s doesn’t.

The funny thing is that while I think the suit and mask have greater visual impact for Vic, I think they work symbolically better on Renee, at least that’s true if we use Ditko’s vision of the character. For Ditko, the Question represented the ideal of the Rand’s objectivism and individualism. Ditko’s Question rebelled against capitulating to corporate interests and rejected societal pressures, but his Question also looked like the ultimate corporate drone, the ultimate “suit.” Conversely, Renee as the Question appears to be rebelling against all feminine conventions of fashion. While women are normally urged to accent their facial features with lipstick, eyeliner, mascara, etc., Renee has removed her face entirely. The suits on her aren’t emblematic of conformity but of her rejection of gender norms. She is ironically more a visual manifestation of the principles of individualism because she is not the standard female comic character in a skimpy outfit and porn face even while her costume in another sense removes her identity in a way that is more obvious than the usual comic book mask.

Amy Reads: The suit has such a deep and interesting history, for both men and women, that I think your resistance of its designation as “male” or “female” is quite right. The suit is, traditionally, considered more “masculine,” but women’s clothing often has included a more masculine aspect as an accent: the military style of the latter 19th century, the large shoulders of the 1980s, the boyfriend sweaters of the 1990s, etc.

But men often are subject to the lack of clothing choices–as your recollection of the sign at the parade rightly suggests–once the suit comes into fashion in the early 19th century. There are some great books out there on the suit–John Harvey’s Men in Black, Anne Hollander’s Sex and Suits, for example–that examine the impact of the shift to trousers after the French Revolution (the sans culotte costume of the French workers), and, of course, the shift to black in the nineteenth century.

By taking the suit and making it her own, particularly by exposing her hair, I don’t think that Renee is purposefully reminding the audience that she is female through more traditionally “feminine” designations, like longer hair or emphasized bust. I think Renee is putting her own mark on the costume to make it her own and, honestly, to make it more comfortable for a female body that is, decidedly, different than a male body.

“Legacy” Characters

In comic fandom currently, there seems to be a sort of backlash against what people are calling “legacy” characters — women, gays and minorities who take over roles previously held by mostly Caucasian males. Montoya is one of those characters who, as a lesbian Latina, satisfies the trifecta of what some believe is a forced diversification of comics.

Do you think such characters are an example of forced diversification, or that the comic industry is still operating under a quota or token system for women, gays and minorities?

How much of this backlash from fandom do you think arises from prejudice, and how much from an attachment to specific characters that they believe to have been replaced for the cause of diversity?

Scott Anderson: It’s hard to say how much of it is backlash to diversity vs. resistance to change vs. real criticism of poor writing. We know from the whole Hal/Kyle business with H.E.A.T. and all that not all resistance to these legacy characters comes from a backlash to perceived diversity mandates. On the flip side, it has also been very clear that some people see these characters attempts to rob traditional readers of comics of the characters to hand them to nontraditional readers of comics. Chuck Dixon and the folks on his Dixonverse message board were quite vocal that they thought that turning the Rawhide Kid gay was a theft of the character from them, turning him from something they enjoyed into something they couldn’t read, and taking the theft very personally … even though, the Kid didn’t have a comic anyway. They saw it as a retroactive theft of their memories of the character. I have to believe that the Dixonverse’s aversion to the coming out of Renee, where they readily admitted that lesbians usually have straight experiences before coming out as gay but still thought it was out of character for her to come out as gay after only being seen as straight, was based in part on their fears of homosexuality. They think there is something about children seeing gay characters being gay that will do something to children or destroy society or something that they don’t think will happen when kids see straight characters being straight or murderous characters being murderous or whatever.

I do recall that some years ago on the DC boards, someone said that they ONLY reason a writer would include a gay character in a comic was to make some pro-gay political commentary. I then created a list of — IIRC – about 78 other reasons an author might use a gay character. Some people had trouble wrapping their minds around it because they could only see gay inclusion as political, and never as artistic, realistic, biographical, thematic, etc. Of course, many of these people grew up in an era when the only time one spoke of gays was as the creepy folks of the gay agenda that wants to convert your kids. I think as the years have passed, this trend as diminished so that people can see other reasons for including a gay character, including that there was no specific reason to make a character gay than there was to make a character straight. The character is just envisioned that way.

So again, I say it’s hard to tell what is motivating people. Even when they say they are opposed to the legacy character because they are opposed to forced diversity, I have to wonder if they would still be opposed to the legacy character just because they liked the old character so much and they’re just using a argument of forced diversity to bolster their feelings. Were Legion fans opposed to the snake Projectra because they liked the old Projectra or because they hate snakes? Hard to say. Similarly, resistance to the new Question would be spawned from the love of the old Question or sexism, homophobia, racism, or something else entirely. Or a combination.

Amy Reads: Oi, this makes me So Angry.

Not, of course, at you, Scott, but at the people who think such things. With writers like Rucka and Brubaker, say, we can see the logical progression of characterization, but the response to them? I think this can be viewed further through the constant press surrounding Batwoman (”oh no! She’s a lesbian!” and “oh no! She’s a rich lesbian!” which almost seems what everyone was in a kerfluffle about). It must be “for a reason” that she is gay, no? I mean, certainly it cannot be because that is her character? Never. There must be Some Hidden Agenda.

(like the feminist agenda. I received my toaster oven several years back.)

You are certainly right that things are changing, slowly, but since beginning blogging two years ago (and thus becoming aware of a larger feminist voice in comics discussion), I have seen the common gutpunch response of “If you don’t like it, make your own comics” which almost always seems to be a veiled way of saying “no girls or homosexuals or non-whites in my comics, thank you!” which of course completely discounts the fact that 1) the world is a many-faceted thing, and 2) there are readers and writers. While I long to be A Writer (on Barda, or the Amazon Princess, thanks), I am First and Foremost A Reader, by Degree, by Profession, and of course, out of Love.

But perhaps since I am part or supportive of Said Agendas, I exist outside the pale, no?

Feel free to continue this discussion in the comments section below!

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A History of Renee Montoya - Part III: On the beat

Art by Michael Lark

One of Renee Montoya’s first assignments with Crispus Allen in Detective #744 (May 2000) also sees her working alongside her other long-time partner, Harvey Bullock. Their quarry is also a familiar face — Whisper A’Daire, here a Ra’s Al Ghul associate bringing a miracle drug to Gotham, but later the leader of the Dark Faith religion that Renee works with the Question and Batwoman to bring down in 52.

Rucka feels that the addition of Allen as Montoya’s partner served to bring out more of Montoya’s character: “Well, we knew the relationship between Renee and Harvey at that point. It was status quo, and it didn’t really reveal anything new about either of them. Bringing Cris in allowed both he and Montoya to be further fleshed out in a fairly organic, easy way. And the trope of a new partner was good, solid cop-story drama, so that was an obvious benefit. So it served both of them, because both of them had to get to know one another, and trust one another, and in doing so, we learned about both of them.”

Detective #747

Renee finds herself in the spotlight again a few months later, in Detective #747. Rucka picks up the threads started in his No Man’s Land run in telling the story of Renee’s birthday. The day is full of hardships — Renee’s father talks openly and suggestively about the fact that Renee isn’t married and hasn’t started a family, and Renee has to testify at a trial that ignores the grey areas created by post-earthquake conditions in Gotham. A pair of bright spots exist though: Commissioner Gordon remembers her birthday and provides an ear for her problems, and a bouquet of flowers delivered anonymously to her desk.

Renee investigates at the florist and finds that the sender was none other than Bruce Wayne. She barges into his office and demands to know why he sent them. His response? “Um…because you’re a hottie?” Renee is smart enough to discern who really sent the flowers: Wayne’s old friend, Harvey Dent. Renee goes to visit Dent in Arkham, with a pair of cupcakes. After her visit, in a considerably better mood, she finds a note on her windshield from Batman: “You gave him peace. Thank you for that. Happy birthday.”

Art by Paul Pope

Batman: Turning Points #5 (January 2001) rewinds back to one of Allen’s first assignments in Gotham, and his first encounter with the Batman. While Allen stands gaping at the Caped Crusader, Montoya slams her gun through a windshield in order to bring a perpetrator down. She smiles at the Batman, saying, “I think you scared my partner.”

Rucka feels that Allen provides an essential role in the GCPD, that of outsider: “Renee’s born and raised in Gotham. Cris isn’t. And in that, there was opportunity to further show how different Gotham is as an environment. One of the biggest conflicts I have in the Batman mythology is the justification, if that makes sense. If Gotham is so corrupt, Batman is required, then isn’t Batman a failure if, after ten years, it’s still just as corrupt?”

Renee doesn’t officially make an appearance in Detective Comics #753 (February 2001), but it’s worth mentioning that she’s the inspiration for “R’nee” in the Harvey Dent comic creation, “The Adventures of Copernicus Dent and his Plucky Assistant R’Nee.” A red-headed pastiche of pulp vixens, R’Nee is the damsel in distress in Harvey Dent’s therapeutic creation. In the end, however, the review board refuses to acknowledge that the art therapy program has any value.

Art by Durwin TalonArt by Durwin Talon

March of 2001 saw the Bat-crossover story, “Officer Down,” in which Jim Gordon, on his way home from a birthday party where Renee gave him a first edition of the Long Goodbye, gets shot multiple times in a back alley. Renee and Cris lead the investigation that eventually leads to cop Jordan Rich, formerly mob capo Jordan Reynolds, whom Gordon had busted in his early days in Chicago. In the interrogation box, they play out a good cop/bad cop routine until Renee puts a chokehold on the suspect. Montoya advocates using the threat of the Batman against Rich, but Allen refuses until the last minute. They have to release Rich, but the Batman is indeed waiting outside. Rich confesses to the Batman, but refuses to make a confession.

When Gordon announces his decision to retire, and Rich files a wrongful arrest suit against the city, Montoya finds herself overwhelmed with the feeling that she let the Commissioner down. She calls in sick and goes to Rich’s apartment, where she kicks in the door and puts a gun to his head. Bullock shows up in time to stop her, showing her the handcuff key that Gordon had given all of his officers, and reminding her of her responsibility as an officer of the law. She backs off, and later Bullock finds her drinking and looking at her key. She asks where his is, and he says, “Dunno…musta lost it someplace. Wasn’t gonna use it anyway.”

Renee and Cris are investigating a series of robberies committed by police officers in Detective Comics #758 (July 2001) when they become mindless criminals themselves, spurred by recitation of Lewis Carroll’s “The Hunting of the Snark.” Bruce Wayne’s bodyguard Sasha Bordeaux attempts to prevent the two from robbing a strip club, when she’s taken hostage by the brainwashed Montoya. Wayne, as Batman, intervenes, using a minimum of force to take down Montoya because, as he says, “She’s a good cop.”

Montoya and Allen are booked in Detective #759 (August 2001), as Batman tells new GCPD Commissioner Michael Akin that he suspects the Mad Hatter to be involved. Harvey Bullock resents the arrest of his fellow officers, as well as having to inform them that they’ll be standing trial. By Detective #760 (September 2001), however, the Hatter’s grander scheme has been put into play — one-third of the GCPD under his control, causing chaos in the streets. Montoya and Allen fight against their own to keep control in the jail, while Batman tracks the Hatter to his lair.

The back-up story for Detective #758 also features Montoya, as she has lunch with Barbara Gordon, filling her in on new Commissioner Akin. Gordon concludes in her Oracle journal that from what Montoya says, Akin is a worthy successor to her father.

Detective #761 (October 2001) seems to deal with fallout from the Mad Hatter’s scheme, as internal affairs investigator Esperanza visits the department to talk to Montoya and Allen. However, when Esperanza talks to Montoya in the interrogation room, he explains that he’s there to talk to her about Jordan Rich. Montoya was violent with him during interrogation, and was later seen going to Rich’s apartment looking as though she were going to hurt someone. The problem comes, Esperanza says, from the fact that Rich is missing and possibly murdered.

The next issue shows Esperanza bringing Montoya along on his investigation. They talk to witnesses who place a Gallante family shooter at the scene of the murder. They bring him in for a lineup and he talks, telling them where to find the body and also who helped set up the hit. Montoya goes to Bullock’s office to tell him the news. “Why, Harvey?” she asks.

Art by Rick Burchett

“Because it wasn’t right, Renee,” Bullock says. “He had to answer.” Bullock makes the long walk with his head down to Commissioner Akin’s office, where he turns in his badge.

When Vesper Fairchild is murdered inside Wayne Manor in March 2002, Montoya and Allen lead investigations on the scene. And later, in May’s Detective Comics #768, the two begin an investigation of Alfred Pennyworth, the butler who they think aided and abetted Wayne either fleeing the country, or faking evidence that he had. Allen’s pursuit of what Pennyworth may or may not know leads to Pennyworth accusing the department of harassment. Eventually, Wayne’s name is cleared, as David Cain, the real murderer, is captured.

Art by Michael LarkArt by Michael Lark

February 2003 saw the debut of the series where Montoya came to the fore as a consistent leading character, Gotham Central. Written in tandem by Rucka and Ed Brubaker, with art by Michael Lark, Gotham Central covered the investigations of two shifts of Gotham’s Major Crimes Unit. Writing a book about the GCPD had been a wish of Rucka’s for long before Gotham Central: “I wandered around for months with this pie-chart poll I’d torn out of the back of a Wizard issue. The poll asked “Which supporting character needs his or her own title?” And overwhelmingly, Gordon had won. I’d been pushing and pushing for this book. And it turns out that Ed had the same idea. So we sort of tag-teamed it and managed to sell Carlin on the idea of doing the title.”

The opening storyline, “In the Line of Duty,” has Montoya and Allen trying to figure out the motives of Mister Freeze, as he freezes one officer to death and leaves the other alive, then having to deal, along with the rest of her comrades in blue, as they have to call in Batman to ensure the safety of the public.

Art by Michael LarkArt by Michael Lark

But it’s in June’s Gotham Central #6, the beginning of the Eisner and Harvey award-winning “Half A Life” storyline that Montoya receives the full spotlight. Renee’s out jogging, when she’s handed a subpoena. She’s being sued for ten million dollars by Marty Lipari, an alleged rapist who maintains that he was assaulted during arrest. She spends the day working a robbery case, and begs off early to have dinner with her parents. They give her a grilling on when she plans to settle down, and she winds up spending the night out.

When she gets home, she’s confronted by Esperanza and partner Matt Conway, who tells her that a private detective that Lipari hired has turned up dead, that they suspect Lipari of the murder, and that Renee should watch her back. The private detective managed to get one piece of information about Renee, however — the next day she finds that she’s the talk of the office because of the photograph of her kissing another woman pinned to the office bulletin board.

Her uncouth fellow officers spend the morning deriding her lifestyle decisions, before Captain Maggie Sawyer, a lesbian herself, calls Renee into her office. She wants to know why Internal Affairs was speaking to Renee, and she also wants to tell her, “It’s a one-way door, detective. Once the closet is open, it doesn’t shut again. What you do next, you get to live with it for the rest of your life.” Back at home, Renee has a visit from her brother Benny, who tells her that her parents also received a copy of the photograph. He urges her to verify his lie to them that the photograph was faked, but she struggles with the idea of denying who she is. When he leaves, she calls her girlfriend, Daria, and tells her about being outed. On the walk home, the pair are confronted by Marty Lipari, who films them kissing. Montoya beats the hell out of him, telling him to stay away from Daria. He goes home, muttering under his breath about getting more money from the lawsuit and is greeted at his door by bullets.

Lipari’s body is found alongside a large package of heroin and Montoya’s police revolver. Montoya wakes to find that her gun is missing from her safe, replaced by another package of heroin. She’s still dealing with this discovery when a person at the door says they have a warrant for her arrest. Instead of reporting for work as usual, Montoya is walked across in handcuffs by Esperanza. Daria is brought in for questioning, and she tells them about the encounter with Lipari the night before. Esperanza tries to get Renee to cop a temporary insanity plea, but she maintains her innocence. She’s taken to jail, where Allen visits her. After chastising her for not telling him about being gay, he asks, “Who’s setting you up, partner?”

“It’s Dent,” she says. “It’s Two-Face.”

Art by Michael LarkArt by Michael Lark

Montoya’s trial begins with a not-guilty plea and a surprise switch of attorneys, from a pro-bono to one of Bruce Wayne’s legal staff. Montoya’s mother spots Daria in the crowd of the courtroom and demands to know if she’s the one from the photograph. Montoya’s only response is to apologize to Daria.

Allen, meanwhile, gets saddled with a new rookie partner, Josie Mac, and has to solicit her help in verifying Montoya’s Two-Face suspicions. As Montoya is transported back to the Schreck, the prison bus is ambushed by men in animal masks. Montoya is knocked unconscious and stowed in the trunk of a car that scuffs a mailbox as it arrives on the scene. When Allen and Mac investigate the scene later, Mac is able to use near-supernatural abilities to find the car at the station garage — a police was behind the kidnapping. They trace the car to internal affairs officer Conway, who refuses to comment as he’s arrested.

Art by Michael Lark

Montoya wakes up to find Harvey Dent standing over her, offering her rare steaks and Merlot, and even Tiramisu from Daria’s restaurant. She demands to know why he’s ruining her life, and Dent replies, “I didn’t. He did. It’s how the coin came down, Renee.” Back at the station, Allen spills all that Conway told them about Two-Face threatening his child’s life and a meeting in a presidential suite to Detective Burke, only Burke leaps out the window and is suddenly wearing a cape. Allen calls all available officers to give pursuit.

Meanwhile, Two-Face explains everything he’s done so far to Renee, and tells her that he’s brought her two lives together. Now she is just like him. “You’re the only person who never treated me with pity. You’ve been kind to me. You visited me at Arkham. It’s obvious how I feel about you, Renee. And I thought that perhaps you felt the same. That you loved me too.” Montoya spurns his advances, and he lashes out at her, threatening to kill Daria too. They grapple over his gun, and then suddenly, Batman is there. Two-Face is taken into custody, and Montoya is cleared of charges. Sawyer makes Montoya take four weeks off, and reiterates what she said earlier: “What you do next, you get to live with for the rest of your life.”

Montoya builds up her courage to talk to her parents while Daria waits in the car. It doesn’t go well. Montoya’s parents tell her not to come back. Daria wraps her in her arms and says, “It’s okay, I’ve got you…I’ve got you.”

Rucka had waited for years, since his first comic story “Two Down,” to write “Half A Life.” The story serves as a balance to the previous story, he said: “The fact was, I was writing about the law of averages as much as anything else. Renee kept getting good tosses of the coin. She got a lucky streak. Eventually, that streak was going to break. “Half a Life” is about the streak breaking. And law of averages demands that all of those “good” tosses…they had to be balanced by a long run of “bad” ones.”

The “Half a Life” storyline won Gotham Central and its creators a handful of awards, including the Eisner, the Harvey, and a nomination for the GLAAD Media Awards. Rucka says he especially appreciated winning the Eisner, “Not so much because it vindicated the homosexuality — how can you? — but because it meant that enough people thought it was a good story they voted for it.”

Montoya returns to duty in December 2003’s Gotham Central #12, which starts the storyline “Soft Targets.” The mayor is assassinated by a sniper, then the school superintendent, and both shifts of the GCPD’s Major Crimes Unit are investigating. The culprit soon reveals himself, shortly before shooting out the bat-signal on the GCPD roof — it’s the Joker. Montoya and Allen get saddled with Gotham reporter Simon Lippman as they carry out their investigation, which involves trying to find the seller of a sniper rifle that the Joker is using to carry out his rampage. The Joker hacks the police system and displays webcam images of Gotham buildings with a counter at the bottom.

Officers track down all of the locations but one, but the end of the countdown only reveals a clock that’s counting up. Eventually, the image changes to that of a Gotham television reporter in captivity, just as the Joker shows up at the station to turn himself in. Turns out his plan was to lull everyone into being secure enough to go Christmas shopping, and the reporter is strapped to a bomb in the back of a toy store. Batman arrives to save the reporter, but the GCPD suffers losses, including shift captain L.T. Probson, whom the Joker murders in his getaway.

We next see Montoya in the midst of the “Unresolved” storyline, in Gotham Central #21 (September 2004), having a tense conversation with Harvey Bullock in a stairwell as she takes him up from a cell. Bullock lets her know that he heard she got outed, and that she could’ve told him…he was her partner. She tells him that he gave up the right to saying that when he killed a man. Bullock says he prevented her from doing the same thing. She responds: “What you did was calculated, Harvey. And to know that you think you did it even a little bit to save me? How am I supposed to live with that? How is Jim Gordon supposed to live with that? We were your friends.”

“I don’t deserve this shit,” says Bullock. “I gave up everything that mattered for you and the Commish.”

“That’s the saddest part, isn’t it?” asks Montoya. “You gave it up. And for what?”

Art by Michael LarkArt by Michael Lark

In “Corrigan,” beginning in December’s Gotham Central #23, Montoya and Allen stumble into a gang hit in progress. But the hit turns out to be on a “freak” named Black Spider, who jumps in with Uzi’s firing straight into the torso of Montoya. Her vest stops the bullets, but Black Spider raises his gun to aim for her head. Allen intervenes with a few bullets of his own, and faces an inquest into the death of Black Spider and two men in handcuffs that were also dead on the scene. Unfortunately, the bullet that could clear Allen was put on iBid by corrupt crime scene investigator Jim Corrigan.

After a tip by Esperanza, Montoya tracks Corrigan to a bar full of corrupt cops. After giving him a beat down in the alley behind, he gives up the goods — the bullet’s been sold to an older rich lady collector. Esperanza and Montoya pay her a visit and find a vast collection of criminal artifacts. The two are able to recover the bullet by trading for the last bullet the Black Spider ever fired. Esperanza confesses that he traded his chance to trap Corrigan to get Allen out of trouble because he owed Montoya.

Art by Cliff Chiang

In “Keystone Kops,” beginning in April 2005, Montoya begs her way onto a case in her old neighborhood. A cop trying to rescue a kid stumbled onto a chemistry lab and was turned into a monster by what he found there. What Montoya finds in the neighborhood is that her situation with her parents still hasn’t changed. She and Cris wind up booked on a flight to Keystone to talk to Albert “Dr. Alchemy” Desmond, the incarcerated member of the Rogues Gallery that they believe abandoned the chem. lab. Alchemy works a deal — he’ll cure the mutating cop if he can see him in person. GCPD arranges for Keystone officers to transport Alchemy. But when Alchemy reaches the hospital, he escapes his bonds, and sets the mutated monster loose. Batman goes after him, while Montoya gives Alchemy a beating that puts him into the E.R.

She goes home to Daria, who tells her that her father stopped by to say that he missed her, and that he wanted her back in his life. Montoya sleeps on this prospect, but after losing it when interrogating Alchemy in prison the next day, she hears a call that the berserk mutated officer has been seen in the vicinity of her parents’ store. She arrives on the scene just as the monster cop’s partner puts a bullet through his head. But her father is there, and he’s okay, in more than one way.

The end of the year saw Montoya and Allen investigating a series of Robin murders, and the beginning of the next saw them witnessing the end of the world, interacting with Captain Marvel as Infinite Crisis falls on Gotham. Allen confronts Montoya about her history with Corrigan, and she admits that she blew any future cases against Corrigan by beating him in the alley, but that she did it for the sake of her partner.

February 2006 saw the start of the storyline “Corrigan II,” and Allen confronting his partner over her increasingly violent actions. She’s been out looking for fights at night instead of going home to Daria, and he’s been out tailing corrupt officers. Montoya finds out the latter information after snooping through Allen’s files, and she goes to confront Esperanza. But the internal affairs investigator assures her: Allen is working on his own. Allen warns her off of interfering — he’s close to nailing Corrigan, or so he thinks.

Unfortunately, one of Corrigan’s corrupt comrades spies Kenzie, the informant, narcing to Allen. Corrigan captures and tortures Kenzie, sets up an ambush for Allen, and murders him in cold blood, shooting him in the back.

Art by Sean PhillipsArt by Sean Phillips

Sawyer visits Montoya to break the news, and Montoya comes straight to Central to accuse Corrigan. She pulls Allen’s file on him, and puts her fellow officers on the case. All the evidence is rounded up and seems to point to Corrigan, but Montoya suspects something fishy is up. She’s working through grief though, and lets the other officers take the lead. It doesn’t work. The ballistics don’t match up and Corrigan walks. Montoya goes to Allen’s wake to share the news. She can’t break it to Allen’s wife Dore though, and tells her the investigation is still continuing. She leaves the wake to get drunk, and then leaves the bar to find Corrigan.

It doesn’t take long before he’s on his knees in his kitchen, sobbing and begging her not to kill him. Her finger’s on the trigger, but she doesn’t do it. Instead, she goes to Central the next day to turn in her badge.

Tomorrow: Renee starts down the path of self-degradation before embarking on the road of self-discovery in “A History of Renee Montoya - Part IV: Losing Face”!

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A History of Renee Montoya - Part I: Secret Origins

Montoya in Batman: The New Animated Adventures

Renee Montoya first debuted to the masses in 1992, as a recurring character on the acclaimed cartoon Batman: The Animated Series. Renee’s path to television started with an idea from writer Mitch Brian during the creation of the show’s writer’s bible. Once the idea was there, the character started to develop, according to Brian: “I always feel like she was my one truly original addition to the show. I ran the idea of a Latina uniform cop by Bruce, who liked the notion. I always liked the last name Montoya (probably because of the old TV show High Chaparral) and Bruce and I tossed around first names - I think he said Renee - and it stuck.”

B:TAS Model Sheet

The idea of a Latina character wasn’t a political correctness mandate from the network, but a logical extension of the show’s themes, says Brian: “It wasn’t a demographic thing. It just seemed logical. We wanted a uniform cop because the concept of the show was that it was a crime show with a fantastic element; very much what The Batman started out as. ‘On Leather Wings’ was written as the pilot to stress the cops vs Batman / Batman as vigilante aspect. It was like making a 40s crime film - but modernized - and that means, for sure, we’ll need female police officers. The idea of an Hispanic character felt modern, urban - so in that sense we got our uniform cop and female character in one package. The more female characters the better, because we wanted more than just damsels in distress. Harley Quinn was another great female character who has become iconic.”

With her name and role as a Gotham City police officer established, series producer Bruce Timm developed a visual look for Renee. According to Brian, it took no time at all for the character to come to life from Timm’s pen: “I think he had sketches of her within hours of talking about her. He may have drawn her right there. He’s amazing that way.”

B:TAS Model Sheet

A look at initial work on the character (found, along with the writer’s bible selection below, at the treasure trove of a site called World’s Finest) shows that Timm designed Renee as more masculine than other female characters on Batman: The Animated Series. The loose jacket and wide slacks of her police uniform, combined with the short boyish haircut that she appears with in early model sheets makes her seem almost gender-neutral. Though the final design for the character cinched the uniform at the waist to more clearly accentuate her femininity, she still has more of a broad-shouldered self-assuredness than many of the show’s other female characters.

Much of the writers’ original intentions for the character never made it to the screen or the comics: the original writer’s bible description of Renee describes her as a cynical widow with an affinity for children. But other details defined in this initial depiction of the character have carried through to the present — her strong ties to Catholicism and the working class, her dry sense of humor, and her uneasy relationship with the Batman:

Like Bruce Wayne, Renee Montoya lost someone near her to Gotham’s criminal element. Her husband, also a poilce officer, was killed two years ago in the line of duty. She has continued on as a “legitimate” crime fighter. She grew up in Gotham’s Crime Alley and saw, first hand, what criminal lifestyles did to people. Young, tough and cynical, with a dry sense of humor, she holds a grudging respect for the Batman, but has mixed emotions about his vigilantism. Nevertheless, they often find themselves thrown together as allies, and Batman’s knowledge of her past causes him to be particularly fond of her.

She hates Bruce Wayne and everything he stands for. Inclined to spend off-duty time in volunteer work for St. Joan’s Catholic Church, she believes that Wayne is selfish and deaf to the cries of Gotham’s poor. She wishes she had kids and has a real soft spot for them, as well as a strong dedication to her family.

Despite her cynical facade, she has idealistically sworn herself to work within the confines of the law, and unfortunately finds herself at odds with Batman’s methods. She secretly dreads the day that she might be faced with the task of having to arrest the Batman.

An unnamed Renee made her first appearance in “Pretty Poison,” September 14, 1992, but her true debut came on September 18th, in the episode titled “P.O.V.” In the episode, Renee faces interrogation from internal affairs on the subject of a sting operation gone wrong. Her testimony differs from that of her fellow officers — future partner Harvey Bullock and a rookie named Wilkes — and, as none of them seem to be able to present the truth, the investigator strips them of their badges. Renee finds redemption while following clues on her own, finding the gangsters the sting operation failed to net, and encountering the mysterious Batman. Montoya was voiced in the episode by actress Ingrid Oliu.

“‘P.O.V.’ was one of the initial springboard ideas we had when we were coming up with episode ideas way before anything went into production,” Brian said. “We wanted to do a “Rashomon” story building on the myth of The Batman.”

Courtesy of Time Warner-owned AOL Video, enjoy Renee Montoya’s debut in “P.O.V.”:

The decision to give Renee the spotlight in “P.O.V.” was an easy one, says Brian: “She’s the most deserving: the perfect combination of youth, power and experience. The other two are extremes. Wilkes is a rookie, Bullock’s a thug - neither really have what it takes. She’s the balance point compared to them.”

Montoya appeared in ten more episodes of Batman: The Animated Series:

  • “Vendetta” - October 5, 1992 - voiced by Ingrid Oliu
  • “The Strange Secret of Bruce Wayne” - October 29, 1992 - voiced by Ingrid Oliu
  • “Cat Scratch Fever” - November 5, 1992 - voiced by Ingrid Oliu
  • “Harley and Ivy” - January 18, 1993 - voiced by Ingrid Oliu
  • “The Man Who Killed Batman” - February 1, 1993 - voiced by Ingrid Oliu
  • “Trial” - May 16, 1994 - voiced by Liane Schirmer
  • “Make ‘Em Laugh” - November 5, 1994 - voiced by Liane Schirmer
  • “Catwalk” - September 13, 1995 - voiced by Liane Schirmer
  • “A Bullet for Bullock” - September 14, 1995 - voiced by Liane Schirmer
  • “Batgirl Returns” - November 12, 1994 - voiced by Liane Schirmer

When the contract for Batman: The Animated Series ran out at Fox, Bruce Timm and company revamped the show for the New Batman/Superman Adventures, redesigning some characters, and adding a new Robin in Tim Drake. One of the characters receiving a redesign was Renee, though there was a reason — she’d been promoted to detective.

Redesigned Renee from The New Batman Adventures

Renee appeared in two episodes of The New Batman Adventures, “Holiday Knights,” which featured a series of vignettes about Gotham City at Christmas — one showing Bullock and Montoya on a stakeout at a local shopping mall dressed as Santa and his elf, respectively, and “Over the Edge,” a literal nightmare of a story where the GCPD storm the Batcave and Batgirl dies. Liane Schirmer provided the voice of Renee in both episodes.

Montoya in Gotham Girls Flash Cartoon

Renee also had a role in the Shockwave / Macromedia /Adobe Flash cartoon series on the Warner Bros. website called Gotham Girls. Renee debuts in the third season of the series, taking part in a whodunit that led to the debut of Batman / Mr. Freeze: Sub-Zero. The finale saw a broken-wristed Montoya fighting alongside Batgirl to save the life of Commissioner Jim Gordon. Renee’s voice in the series was provided by Adrienne Barbeau, who had also voiced Catwoman for Batman: The Animated Series.

Season three of Gotham Girls is still available on the Warner Bros. website.

Batman: Chaos in GothamBatman: Chaos in Gotham

Though Renee didn’t appear in any of the games that viewers could play as Gotham Girls loaded, she did make a cameo appearance in two screens of the Game Boy Advance game Batman: Chaos in Gotham.

Montoya also appeared in comics that were based on the animated series over the years. Many of these stories were comic versions of episodes, others featured Montoya working in supporting roles as a member of the GCPD. One notable exception, where Renee carried the spotlight, came in the mini-series Gotham Girls.

Art by Shane Glines

Writer Paul Storrie says that the Gotham Girls mini-series came indirectly as a result of the Flash series: “I was a fan of the web ‘toons, but came to them a bit late. Basically, I’d been using an old, slow computer when they first started appearing, so I only watched a couple. When I finally upgraded my machine, I checked out all the available episodes and really enjoyed them. At that time, I’d already done a couple projects for DC’s “Animated Series” titles (Batman Beyond and Justice League Adventures). It hit me, as I watched the Gotham Girls webisodes, that they’d be an excellent inspiration for a comic book series. What’s more, I was hoping that the series might find a wider audience by being based on a successful web ‘toon. So I wrote my Batman Beyond editor and pitched him the idea for the mini-series. He liked it, but was no longer editing the Batman Animated. He referred me to Joan Hilty, who had taken on that task. Joan thought the idea had merit and, after a bit of back and forth, I got the green light.”

Storrie was already a fan of the Montoya character, having first heard of her in an interview with Paul Dini and Bruce Timm about the animated series: “I remember reading an interview with, I believe, Paul Dini and Bruce Timm, about this Latina cop who was going to be partnered with Harvey Bullock and the description they gave just made her sound like an interesting character with lots of potential…When I started to look at doing the series a